..First poem evaa!

[MagMelle]

I felt an emotion
It cured me like a potion
Yet hurt me like a knife.
It sucked out all my life.
Im talking about Love
The cold hands that touch me
Can also awake
Like falling into a lake
But i will never swim up.
I shall fall down to the bottom
Because I already gave up.

Okay,my first poem ever. I thought of this just now while freezing. Its kinda obvious,But its about how love can be so different. It can work negative and positive,but in this case,the person already got hurt so much that the person gave up on love.

[MagMelle]

I'm going down to the bottom
Unable to look up
But I get pulled back,
Knowing I would lack.
I sadly look up to that sky,
Whispering to myself, ''Why?''
Its because im not worth enough,
I'm said to be no good,
and not tough.

I try to spice the mood,
Yet knowing that it's not like food.
It's not that easy,yet not that hard.
All you have to do is give it a try
But you will fall apart

Just some random doodle,heehee. I made this while writing,and its no good,I know. This poem isn't right,It's supposed to be about someone who tries to make big money but fails,but I wrote going down,but get pulled back to up @__@; Not right,but who cares. Lets keep it on the fact that this poem means nothing. o-o

[MagMelle]

Down there,theres alot to fear.
You will feel like death is near.
Thinking of a way to get out,
You scream,yell,shout.
Trying to think about a way,
You think about the same thing every day.
Not realizing time is running out
You live in agony,in fear
Fear for that one thing to appear.

I guess this poem is about death/hell.The line ''you will feel like death is near'' Isn't right because you're already dead,though. xD

[MagMelle]

I let myself be guided from the rain
I'm trying to free myself from this pain
Within a eyeblink,it was done
My love and life,forever gone
By this one terrible thing
It was acting like a king
Ruling over our lives.
But there was one thing they didnt know
It was that there was friendship under us
Love,life,and best of all,no sorrow.

Im just in the mood of writing poems. This is the suckiest one i've made. Its about a person who gets people as slaves,and kill the ones that the person cant use.
Im going to sleep now and hope to see some comments when i wake up. Its already 2:30 am! No time for a 12 year old =D

[Baroness]

Aww that is very nice and Deep!

[anpan]

I like your poems. They actually make sense unlike some other poems that I`ve read at school. Really pretty collection! :]