Darkest Star

[keloid.miruku]

Because the moon's a razor
It cuts me down to size
While I give my all just to see
Myself reflected in your eyes

Because wishes are just wishes,
Mine never will come true
Baby, the stars never
Shine bright for me

And my darkest star
Is you


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Cross-posted to my deviantart. As this piece is rather personal, critique is discouraged.

[Rococo maiden]

I like it! It's both beautiful and haunting. . . :yum:

[keloid.miruku]

Thank you for your kind comment <3

[$MiLe$!=)]

It's so beautiful Kolaid :D . Peaceful yet sad :( . It a lovely poem. I don't think anyone will criticize it. I would love to hear more poems if it's not a bother. I really did love. I would look forward to hearing more poems from you.

[MagMelle]

I really love this poem! I'll try to make some too,even though i suck in it. Keep going! :D

[Baroness]

This is a really good poem!