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xardra
06-04-2007, 01:49 AM
i kinda just thought of this so yea...


this is my return
my return to the girl i wnat to be...
i have messed up a lot in my life
i regret many decisions
i have so many scars
i have so much pain...

then i see it a window i can jump through
the chance to be her again
the innocent girl
so happy
so sweet...
how i have missed you...

i miss you, girl i once was...
girl i swear to be...


i suck at grammar and spelling and punctuation, so sorry...

this was just my take on me becoming lolita...
i kinda want to wipe the slate clean and start over, almost...



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and look super dooper uber cute doing it!!!

sukiyume
06-04-2007, 03:54 AM
i kinda just thought of this so yea...


this is my return
my return to the girl i want to be...
i have messed up a lot in my life
i regret many decisions
i have so many scars
i have so much pain...

then i see it a window i can jump through
the chance to be her again
the innocent girl
so happy
so sweet...
how i have missed you...

i miss you, girl i once was...
girl i swear to be...


i suck at grammar and spelling and punctuation, so sorry...

this was just my take on me becoming Lolita...
i kinda want to wipe the slate clean and start over, almost...

I like it a lot and I think you should keep on writing. But it doesn't matter rather I hate it or love it, writing is part of your soul... the pen is just the medium that transfers it onto paper so as long as it makes you happy writing that line or this is all that matters.

I hope you find that you want in frilly dress. :)